Reflections On a Bug While Cruising In a Boat on Lake Ontario

[browncoat2x2]

I forgot. I composed a poem when I was in Kingston on the cruise. It's called Reflections On a Bug While Cruising In a Boat on Lake Ontario and goes thusly:








Reflections On a Bug
While Cruising In a Boat on Lake Ontario



Little bug, fly far away from here,
There are better lights to call you.






I wrote it while standing on the promenade deck over looking the lower level of the boat we were on, watching a fly of some sort buzz around a light on the back of the boat as we cruised along. It doesn't really have any reflections in it, as the title suggests, but I wanted to record it for my own memories.

Comments

[ceslas.livejournal.com]

Awwww, adorable! And a perfect lead in to a total whinge on my part: CHOICES!!!!! Girl, ya gotta finish that one, I just read it from the beginning to Chapter 12 b or whatever it is in your memories...BUT YA GOTTA FINISH IT! YES I AM YELLING!

It is too good to be just sitting there collecting angst and pain....

[browncoat2x2]

Oy... Choices... the millstone around my neck...

Go back to my memories... part 13 A is now in there, I didn't realize I hadn't added it... so, you get another 5000+ words to read... I'm workin on it, slowly.. I've had to back burner it for a while, because the guilt is killing all my creativity.

And thanks *smiles* I'm glad you're enjoying it... and if you just read it all... that's a heck of a lot in one sitting *G*

I *will* finish it... there's 6000 words of the next two parts written.. just not consecutive words, so.. but I have sworn to finish it eventually.