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Title: Laundry Time
By: 2x2

Rating: G
Spoilers: Slight allusion to Post BDM
Word Count: 338
A/N: Drabble! Written for my dear and lovely wife, [livejournal.com profile] agent_rouka who suffers from the agonies of a cold and asked me to tell her what Mal likes best about doin’ laundry, and while maybe I didn’t quite answer that question, this is what I got. Get well soon, darlin’. *HUGS*







It's the simplicity of it that draws him to it. The routine. 'Nara would call it a Ritual, akin to meditatin', and she wouldn't be far off. There's a way it helps empty his head of cumbersome thoughts, let's him refocus, get a sense of things again with the mindless, repetitive nature of it.


That an' the way the smell of fresh laundry still brings to mind a picture of his Ma stringin' up the laundry on Saturdays, airin' out the linens for a fresh start to the week on Sunday. Brings to mind memories of him an Bobby Cullen and the thrashin' his Mama gave 'em both for slingin' mud on the freshly washed tablecloths in the throes of battle in their epic struggle for the attentions of Becky Landry, not that either of 'em ever admitted that. It's enough to bring a smile to his face, 'fore he remembers not to.


An' lately it's given the opportunity for him an' Inara to rub elbows, as she's taken to washin' her things on Saturday's too of late, now that she don't have the services of that fancy Trainin' House no more. He's wondered if it was a deliberate choice, her pickin' Saturday of all days, if it was just a coincidence or if she might maybe want the time together too, considerin' that she ain't left yet, and that ain't nothin'.


He lets the thought be as the scent of her detergent mingles with his own, makin' laundry time smell a whole new way. Familiar enough that his Ma's still there, in his memory, but different enough that he's kept firmly in the present. It's a might harder to focus now, with her there, but he doesn't mind it. They've never once said anything to hurt the other over the promising scent of their freshly laundered clothes, and he's glad for it. Not that they talk over much - they surely don't - but they're together and as far as he's concerned, he calls that a win.




Date: 2006-08-20 06:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ceslas.livejournal.com
Any time Mal can call something a win, I am happy! And the smell of fresh laundry just is happy all by itself.

Date: 2006-08-20 07:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] agent-rouka.livejournal.com
Awwww! You fought your brains for my benefit, thatis so sweet! :D
Of course, others benefit, too, hehe.

It's all so quiet and calm and all about laundry smell! Vedry peaceful. :)

He's wondered if it was a deliberate choice, her pickin' Saturday of all days, if it was just a coincidence or if she might maybe want the time together too, considerin' that she ain't left yet, and that ain't nothin'.

Heee! You know Mal's trying to play casual when he starts rambling. *G*

I like thatpicture of them, domestic and not talking = not fighting and just glowing at each other about the closeness. Mm. Happy.

Thank you, dearest! A lovely thing to wake up to!

Date: 2006-08-20 07:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cathiexx.livejournal.com
This was sweet. SWEET! Coming from you! What's happening? *grins*

I loved this. Such a lovely little piece. The details you put into this; Mal remembering his mother and his childhood friends and adventures, all wrapped up in the scent and routine of doing laundry. It's so real and simple and gorgeous. And of course, the way you threw Inara into the new routine of it all. Just lovely.

Thanks for sharing! *kisses*
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Date: 2006-08-20 02:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elizalavelle.livejournal.com
I love the little slices of backstory you come up with :) This was a lovely piece of writing :)

Date: 2006-08-20 05:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] goldy-dollar.livejournal.com
Awww! The cute!!! And Inara's decision to do her laundry on Saturdays is totally not a coincidence!!! Awwwwww. *squishes them*

But... I have to ask, does Serenity have washing machines? Or do they hand-wash stuff in sinks and then hang them up to dry?

Date: 2006-08-20 07:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] terimaru.livejournal.com
You and Isha both writing on the same day is LOVE. So glad I took time away from cleaning and doing laundry to check my friends list. Bad thing? There's no Mal in my laundry room. :Heavy sigh: Oh, well, I'll just have to 'magine.

Prettimous words. I like the way you strung them together!



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