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Late, Again
by 2x2

A/N: Just a little M/I to fill the void. I’ll post this in the next Redux week for FF_Friday under Challenge #99 – Running Late, but in the meantime, I thought I’d post it here.
Word Count: 741
Rated: R for sexual situations
Paring: Mal/Inara
Spoilers: None




He likes to mark her.

Little nips and sucks intended to lay his claim, let them know that she is his, even as she plies her trade. It drives her mad; she knows he does it intentionally, even yelled at him for it once, the first time, when he’d ambushed her barely half an hour before she was due to meet her client, messing her finely arranged hair and clothes, his mouth leaving a trail of red welts around her neck, impossible to conceal.

He can’t regret it, and she doesn’t really blame him. It’s one of her concessions in their on-going war over her job. He lets her go, but he always makes sure they’ll know she’s spoken for. And, judging by the way she moans when he brings his teeth into play, she doesn’t really mind. It amazes him, the way she can’t resist when his mouth plunders her skin, and he’ll use that to his advantage today, marking her, making her late, as he does every time.

* * * * *

Applying the last touches to her make-up, Inara hears the shuttle door open and sighs; knows she is doomed.

“Mal,” she protests as he pulls her to him, mouth attacking her neck, teeth nipping and tongue laving. “Mal, please… I’ve got a client in twenty minutes…” she trails off into a moan. Damn him, she hates his ability to render her weak and helpless with need for him. He’s going to make her late, she knows it, but she can’t care. Can’t even pretend she hasn’t been waiting for him in fretful excitement.

He bends and slides his hands beneath her gown, pushing it up her thighs, his fingers trailing up the inside of her legs before slipping between her moist curls, already wet for him. He strokes her, mouth catching hers in a hungry kiss, pressing himself against her, hot and urgent.

“Damn you,” she breathes against him, tugging him down onto the bed with her, feeling his smug grin against her lips. She reaches for him, freeing him from his pants, heavy and pulsing with need in her hand. “Hurry, Mal,” she pleads, guiding him between her legs, a cry ripping from her lips as he drives himself into her, pressing his head into her shoulder, face against her neck as he shudders.

She closes her eyes, savoring the feel of him inside her, above her, and then she urges him on, her hands frantic on his back as he begins to thrust.

It is fast and hard, as it always is before she leaves to meet her clients; hard enough that she will carry the feel of him for the rest of the day, late enough that she will carry the reminder of him, hot and sticky between her legs, even as she smiles at another man.

His rhythm is erratic, his hips jerky and desperate. He bites her when he comes, and she cries out, the feel of his teeth on her skin enough to trigger her own orgasm, quick and tight, white hot in its intensity.

She comes back to him laving her collarbone with his tongue, soothing this newest brand of his. She breathes heavily, feels sweat at the small of her back, behind her knees, between her breasts. Mal lies on top of her, chest heaving, face cushioned on her breasts and she strokes his hair lovingly.

“I love you,” she whispers, as she always does in their little ritual. Sometimes his answer is a sad smile and a kiss; sometimes it is silence. Today it will be bitter, she can tell. She always can.

“Then don’t go,” he says, and she closes her eyes, tired. He rolls off her when she doesn’t answer, puts himself away and stands angrily, like she’s the one who barged into his room. She watches him leave, knowing when she gets back she will have to sooth this hurt, as she always does, and earn her place in his bed again. And as much as it hurts and frustrates her, she knows she will keep doing it, because she really does love him.

Sighing, she rises and readjusts her gown, makes last minute fixes to her hair and make-up; smoothes her fingers over the red blemish he’s left on her skin with fondness, then puts away her love and passion.

Composed, she leaves to meet her client, and apologize, again, for being late.

Date: 2006-04-18 07:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] isha-libran.livejournal.com
Ah... So much heat, and so much tension...

I can't figure who I feel more sorry for, Mal or Inara!

Good job! =)

Date: 2006-04-18 07:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] agent-rouka.livejournal.com
Uh!

*flailing, pointing, twitching*

With the..!!!

*spontaneous combustion*

*painstacking re-constitution*

Whoa.

Date: 2006-04-18 08:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] agent-rouka.livejournal.com
Attempt at coherence:

So hot. So twisted. So bitter-helpless-needy-kinky-pretty. Passive-aggressive. Possessive. Primitive.

Making a ritual out of it, too. Like a good luck charm or symbol or spell that will somehow take the worst of the impossible sting away. And Inara mixed up somewhere between irritated, understanding and decidedly turned on.

It's so, so, so, so, so them.



I'm a little rattled with how much I like this. Mal/Inara jealous pre-client sex must be a previously undetected (yet not entirely surprising) kink of mine.

I mean, whoa.

Date: 2006-04-18 08:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mayorst.livejournal.com
*dies* That was freakin' hot! Poor Mal. Poor Inara. Poor unwanted, unloved, client that's left wondering why she's late after seeing the hickeys. *snort* Not really, but yeah.

Such a catch 22 it is. :)

Date: 2006-04-18 08:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mayorst.livejournal.com
*gasp* You've got to write that!!! I'll beat you with a stick iffin you don't!!! 0:-)

Date: 2006-04-18 09:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mayorst.livejournal.com
Well then, I'll have to make sure it "percolates" won't I? >:-) *snicker*

Date: 2006-04-18 09:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mayorst.livejournal.com
Mucho grande trouble. :)

Date: 2006-04-18 08:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] youngcurmudgeon.livejournal.com
Gah. I really want to see this happen. Even though the ow factor makes me wish it wouldn't ... it works. So well. And ... yeah. Gah and guh both.

Date: 2006-04-18 08:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] youngcurmudgeon.livejournal.com
The more I think about this situation, the more I want it to stop. Except not. Except yes. Sequel? Where maybe Inara has given up being a Companion but now doesn't get the hotness that is Jealous!Mal? Or something? ~will remember how to speak in real sentences any day now, really~

Date: 2006-04-18 09:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] youngcurmudgeon.livejournal.com
*gleefully jumps about at rendering [livejournal.com profile] youngcurmudgeon incapable of speaking in real sentences*

~grabs a jump rope~ Cinderella, dressed in yella, went upstairs to kiss a fella ...

In case you can't tell, there's only so much of Ze Angst I can take before I try to start making it happy. Or just making Mal and Inara have lots of hot sex. Which is probably why I liked this so much!

Date: 2006-04-18 08:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kballgetlost.livejournal.com
GAH! That was so wonderful and then painful...and then sad....I feel so bad for both of them! But seriously great fic!!

Date: 2006-04-18 08:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] goldy-dollar.livejournal.com
OMG. *dies*

So much... with the love!!!

The hot! The dysfunctional twisted possessive sex!!! *faints*

There's so much in here. Their inability to let go of each other, complete with their inability to completely open up and give in. Inara being both strong and weak at the same time. The dysfunctional ritual of it all. GAH. GUH. *flails*

“I love you,” she whispers, as she always does in their little ritual. Sometimes his answer is a sad smile and a kiss; sometimes it is silence. Today it will be bitter, she can tell. She always can.

Those were my favourite few sentences of this whole piece. Wonderful, wonderful stuff. *smushes you*

*memories*

Date: 2006-04-18 08:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ala-me.livejournal.com
Wondful, and perfect and just so them. I loved it! Really really loved it :) Please say that this isn't going to just be a one shot, cause it has so much potential.

Date: 2006-04-19 12:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] carmen-sandiego.livejournal.com
I love this. So many fics treat Inara's profession and any sexual relationship with Mal as 2 separate things (and I'm sure I'm guilty of it as well) - it's refreshing to see them blended, and at the same time still keeping the tension and challenge and territoriality. Well done!

Also, hot. ;)

Date: 2006-04-19 01:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lovemycaptain.livejournal.com
It is fast and hard, as it always is before she leaves to meet her clients; hard enough that she will carry the feel of him for the rest of the day, late enough that she will carry the reminder of him, hot and sticky between her legs, even as she smiles at another man.

Oh my... Oh my, yes...yes...YES!!!

Ahhh, what just happened? *fanning self*

The mental picture of Mal branding Inara with his body. What Agent Rouka said... who knew this would be such a turn on?

Date: 2006-04-19 04:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mayorst.livejournal.com
“Hurry, Mal,” she pleads...

Okay yes, another comment. This ficlet is just so freakin' hot I had to come back for seconds. 0:-) But yes anyways... I wonder... You can't really tell if she's pleading because she needs him, or because she's going to be late. *snicker* More than likely for both. Heh.

Once again, here to say how much I love it. :-D

Date: 2006-04-19 04:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cathiexx.livejournal.com
Oooooh. Hot. Liekwhoa.

This was brilliant. Angsty and painful and desperate and gorgeous and of course, hot. The absolute best combination one can have with Mal/Inara. I loved it. Really. SO GOOD!

Well done, you. Bravo!

Date: 2006-07-27 06:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ceslas.livejournal.com
Sighing, she rises and readjusts her gown, makes last minute fixes to her hair and make-up; smoothes her fingers over the red blemish he’s left on her skin with fondness, then puts away her love and passion. Oooo,wow I love that! Her love and passion is so disconnected from her work, as she always says it is, but here you really nail it! Wow! And many thanks must go to [livejournal.com profile] goldy_dollar for posting her favorites! This is on her list, and I can see why! Wow.
Hmmm, many wow's....all earned! Memories....*Content sigh*

Date: 2006-09-29 04:37 pm (UTC)
ext_28210: (seanm)
From: [identity profile] tanisafan.livejournal.com
Ohhh, I love how this was so intense and raw. I think it's clear from your story that this situation can't go on forever, which accounts for the unbridled and hasty passionate encounters. It stops them from thinking about the problems too much.

He lets her go, but he always makes sure they’ll know she’s spoken for.
I think this basically defines them. In my mind, anyway ;).
Okay, note to self: stop theorizing randomly about a fictional story about fictional characters. Le sigh.

Date: 2007-01-05 05:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] girlnorth.livejournal.com
Spicy and a little bit heartwrenching. Very nice.

Here on a rec from [livejournal.com profile] carmen_sandiego.

Date: 2007-01-05 01:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] girlnorth.livejournal.com
Sure, it was in her 2006 fic round-up (http://carmen-sandiego.livejournal.com/332554.html). :)

Date: 2007-01-09 03:15 pm (UTC)

Date: 2008-06-03 04:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] charlie-bz.livejournal.com
*Memories this*

It's late, my mouse is about out of batteries (so my comment spamming will end now, for tonight), and I can't think of anything clever to say.

Other than, I liked this very much. Thank you!

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