Oooh. You certainly managed to capture that sense of weather there! I had no trouble at all envisioning that storm and the cold and wet air and the sense of isolation for these two.
And then that sense of the inevitable. Being so uncertain and certain at the same time. I loved Mal being the optimistic one about this, because it wants to seem odd but really isn't. When Mal knows something he knows it, bt Inara's world is more fluid than that.
And whee for sunshine endings. *G* I want to quote bits but the computer won't let me for some reason, but I just loved that second to last line to death!
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Date: 2006-06-02 12:01 pm (UTC)And then that sense of the inevitable. Being so uncertain and certain at the same time. I loved Mal being the optimistic one about this, because it wants to seem odd but really isn't. When Mal knows something he knows it, bt Inara's world is more fluid than that.
And whee for sunshine endings. *G* I want to quote bits but the computer won't let me for some reason, but I just loved that second to last line to death!