Omg! That was just...beautiful! You're writing just flows so smoothly! I love it! It's weird because while this in centered on Inara, I can see Mal through it too since our little chat about him. Heh. *claps* Well done, well done. Brava!

She'd been counting their seconds for so long.

That's my absolute favourite line. It's *so* true. *le sigh*

Love the happy note there at the end. =) More, please? Always more. I love teh Mal/Inara fluffangst! =D